Kia ora. I am Charlie J from St Mary’s School. I really liked that you made up an animal and the description of the animal. I learnt that I could make my own made up animal. Maybe you could add more slides Please visit my blog here
Hi Iris I think your animal is very interesting. And I think the background fits it very well. Maybe next time you could add more detail to it. Good job! From Eva
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Kia ora. I am Charlie J from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked that you made up an animal and the description of the animal.
I learnt that I could make my own made up animal.
Maybe you could add more slides
Please visit my blog
here
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Charlie J
Hi Iris
ReplyDeleteI think your animal is very interesting. And I think the background fits it very well.
Maybe next time you could add more detail to it.
Good job!
From Eva
Hi Iris it's Ben from Ahipara School your crazy animal , it's cool.
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