Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hello Iris,
ReplyDeleteI really like your story it is very descriptive. Its cool that you have so much animals, also your dog is so adorable! :D
-Lola
Hi iris, I really love your story it is very detailed your dog is so cute next time work on your punctuation
ReplyDeleteGood work.
By Ruby