Thursday, 4 July 2019

Reindeer

Reindeer
Did you know Reindeer live in Europe?
Upon the Reindeer’s back is white, cold icy snow.
Reindeer running through the white forest.
The Reindeer are fighting with their antlers banging together.
Rapidly galloping upon the bushy snow.

Winter jackets.

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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous22 July 2019 at 12:23

    Hi Iris,
    Amazing piece of writing! I really like your use of description by calling it icy snow instead of just snow.
    Once again great work...

    -Liana

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    1. Anonymous24 July 2019 at 08:56

      Thanks Liana,
      Mrs Shaw was teaching us how to do slow writing about any animal we like! I was going to say for my 'Did you know' sentence 'Did you know reindeer tow santa's slay! I loved your comment!
      From Iris

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  2. Anonymous31 July 2019 at 13:48

    Hi Iris I like your reindeer its realy cool that me and you like chameloens from Georgia.

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    1. Anonymous1 August 2019 at 12:15

      Yes Georgia I love chameleons! they are funny!

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